you had something but it just wasnt great
Well i got wind of you when i protected your come on run video which is in my favorite submisions. This one had its ups and downs. The characters were well done. They were interesting and looked ok but they were very 2D which i can forgive. But the special effects were Special... special Ed that is. I like the story line all the way around. the battle scenes and i use that lossly no. The water effects you added Alsome. using real picks for backround understandable. But WTF was with the zebra just sitting there. On one more thing i think needed fixing bad was the angels wings and arms. when he turned the back of his wings should look different and his arms should be hidden by the wings. i doing alittle flash but you look like a master compared to the 5 secound blips of crap im ashamed to submit, know that the arms are high on the levels or lares then the wings so you should have 2 sets to make that appear alittle better. although they could very well be the same thing just copied and pasted for all i care. just as long as when he turns they're on the other side of the wings.
but critisizm aside. Very good work and i look forward to more submitions from you.